Narrative Rang 3-4

Jack and Jill

Jack and Jill went up to town
to fetch a loaf of bread.
When they were in town,
they met an evil clown,
who chopped off poor
Jack’s head

Aidan O’Keeffe, 4th Class

Baa baa black sheep

Baa baa black sheep,
Have you any wheat?
Yes Sir, yes Sir, down the main street.
You can try the butcher, you can try the barber,
The only place you can get it is from a farmer.

Pádraig O’ Sullivan, 4th Class

Halloween night

It was a Halloween night. When I was reading my newspaper in my fine mansion I heard scary sounds coming from my mansion. I was a bit shocked but I said to myself if I found where the sounds were coming from I would be on the newspaper.
So I stood up confidently and walked around and checked every inch of each room but still nothing. There was only one room left and that was the attic, the spookiest room in the house. When I opened the door my eyes blurred but I saw something. It was a vampire but he vanished down through the floor. I ran downstairs as fast as I could but this time he went out the back door. I got my gun and went out to find this guy as I heard a voice calling help. I remembered that when I was small, my friend was kidnapped and now I felt he was out for me but I was not going to let it happen. So I set off with an axe and gun to kill this vampire. I walked and walked until I found the vampire’s cave.
As I approached the mouth of the cave, I heard the vampire’s voice. I raised my gun and shot him dead and when he fell to the ground there was a cloud of smoke. I ran to him but all that was left on the ground was his cloak covered in blood. I then released my friend who was locked in the corner of the cave. We ran to my mansion as fast as we could.

Hugh O’Connor, 3rd Class

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